james’ opinion

From: James Duffy (eldufo@hotmail.com)
Sent: 16 June 2009 16:45:09
To: doormat@innocentdrinks.com
Subject: Grammatical error
Hello,
Your smoothie packaging contains a small grammatical error.
On the list of “innocent promises”, #2 reads: “It is cheaper to buy this carton than do the alternative; buying the fruit yourself and blending it in your kitchen.”
This semi-colon should in fact be a colon. Trust [...]